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Rapunzal


Once upon a time, there was a girl who had magic powers.  Due to the political climate in which this young girl was born, her whole family had to go into hiding. And so, this rich family let all their servants go, except one who had a baby of her own.
The place they chose was a small tower in the hills of Switzerland.   In this new place the baby got ill.  She healed well except that forever more  her power would be stoped by metal.   While the girl was a baby, every time she was taken on the iron staircase she would cry and scream with such vigor that her loving parents brought all of her things up into the rapunzal garden.  Because of this, her parents named her  after that rare flower  with witch she slept.   
This tower had one large room on the top, which could only be reached by a wooden trapdoor.   All around the outside of this tower was an iron staircase covered in beautiful roses leading to more mundane rooms below this tower room.  These rooms were regular enough, kitchens and water closets on the ground floor and bedrooms and such in between.  The ceiling of the top towers room had a gorgeous   garden of rare flowers called Rapunzals
Contrary to popular belief, Rapunzels  parents loved her very much.   They had the one servent who helped them move bring their precious Zell anything and everything she wanted and needed.   
“Pryia ”  Zells parents would say, ”Zell  wants some books.  Take some of the money and buy out the shop” because of this, Zell became dependent on Pryia  who was about  Zells age, and her one friend.
As Zell grew so did her power.   When she was 5, it was discovered that Zells power  was sort of allergic to anything metal.     By the time she was 18, she could do anything she wanted with a snap of a finger or a blink of an eye but when something metal was around, she could do nothing.  So that she could practice this illegal power, her parents had Pryia bring everything  metal out of the tower.   Scissors, knives, anything metal was to go. Finaly the staircase was to be taken down, but it couldn’t be done.    When Zell and Pryia were 20, Zells parents caught a rare desese and died.   Zell and Pryia were left alone.  Without her parents strength, Zell couldn’t move lower then the one large tower room.  In a couple  of months, Pryias parents caught the same illness and died.
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still a work in progress and i plan to make it better

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